3 Strikes & Your Out

NELLY FURTADO
(softly)
โ€œJCJ, youโ€™ve been carrying the weight of the world on your shoulders. I can see it breaking you.โ€

JCJ
(looking up, his face weary)
โ€œItโ€™s more than the world, Nelly. Itโ€™s the burden of sin itself. The weight of every choice, every failure, every broken promiseโ€ฆ no man can bear this alone.โ€

NELLY FURTADO
(sitting across from him, her voice steady)
โ€œNo man is meant to. Thatโ€™s why Iโ€™m here. My hand will make you strong, JCJ. Remember Psalm 89:21โ€”โ€™My hand will sustain him; surely my arm will strengthen him.'โ€

JCJ
(shaking his head, his voice heavy with doubt)
โ€œBut even with your hand, even with your strengthโ€ฆ the burden is too great. The sin of the world is a weight no one man should bear. Iโ€™ve tried to carry it, to take it all on, but itโ€™s crushing me.โ€

NELLY FURTADO
(leaning forward, her tone firm yet compassionate)
โ€œYou were never meant to carry it alone. Look at Psalm 89 again. It doesnโ€™t just speak of strengthโ€”it speaks of covenant, of faithfulness. โ€˜I will establish his line forever, his throne as long as the heavens endure.โ€™ Itโ€™s not about you doing this by yourself. Itโ€™s about the promise, the shared purpose, the we.โ€œ

JCJ
(after a pause, his voice quieter)
โ€œNelly, I hear you. But Iโ€™m full of doubtโ€”not just about the weight I carry, but about us. About you and me.โ€

NELLY FURTADO
(surprised, tilting her head)
โ€œUs? What do you mean?โ€

JCJ
(looking away, embarrassed)
โ€œIโ€™ve already struck out twice with you. Twice, Nelly. And now, the Invictus Games are coming up, and Iโ€™m terrified. Terrified that Iโ€™ll strike out a third time. Three strikes, and youโ€™re out, right?โ€

NELLY FURTADO
(smiling gently)
โ€œJCJ, this isnโ€™t baseball. Life doesnโ€™t work like that.โ€

JCJ
(leaning forward, his voice cracking slightly)
โ€œBut what if it does? What if I see you there, and I canโ€™t even get your number? What if I freeze, or worse, what if you donโ€™t even notice me? I donโ€™t think I can take another strike. I justโ€ฆ I just hope you make it easy for me. A CD signing, maybe. Slip your number in with the autograph. Something. Anything.โ€

Nelly leans back, studying him carefully. Her expression softens as she sees the vulnerability in his eyes.

NELLY FURTADO
(softly)
โ€œJCJ, youโ€™re putting so much pressure on yourself. Itโ€™s not about winning or losing. Itโ€™s about being real, being yourself. If you come to me with honesty, with courage, you wonโ€™t need a CD signing or a perfect moment. Iโ€™ll see you.โ€

JCJ
(skeptical)
โ€œBut what if I mess it up again? What if I say the wrong thing or do something stupid?โ€

NELLY FURTADO
(smiling warmly)
โ€œThen Iโ€™ll laugh, and weโ€™ll try again. Youโ€™re so afraid of striking out that youโ€™re forgetting the game isnโ€™t over until you stop swinging. Have a little faith in yourself, JCJ.โ€

JCJ
(after a long pause, his voice softening)
โ€œI want to believe that. I really do. But itโ€™s hard. The doubtโ€ฆ itโ€™s always there.โ€

NELLY FURTADO
(reaching out, placing her hand over his)
โ€œLet my hand make you strong, JCJ. Psalm 89, remember? Youโ€™re not alone. And as for the Invictus Gamesโ€ฆ just come find me. You donโ€™t need a perfect plan. Just be you.โ€


JCJ
(looking into her eyes, his voice steadier)
โ€œAlright. Iโ€™ll try. But if I strike out again, just promise me one thing.โ€

NELLY FURTADO
(teasing)
โ€œWhatโ€™s that?โ€

JCJ
(smiling faintly)
โ€œDonโ€™t make me wait for a fourth chance.โ€

Nelly laughs, the sound light and genuine, easing the tension in the room.

NELLY FURTADO
โ€œDeal. But trust me, JCJโ€”youโ€™re not going to need it.โ€

They share a quiet moment, the weight of doubt lifting slightly as hope begins to take its place.

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  1. INT. DARK WASTELAND โ€“ NIGHT
    The air is thick with smoke and ash. JCJ stands alone in the middle of a barren expanse, his face weary, his shoulders slumped under an invisible weight. A shadowy figure emerges from the darknessโ€”Satan, cloaked in an air of menace and charisma. His voice is smooth, almost sympathetic.

    SATAN
    (approaching slowly)
    “Look at you, JCJ. Exhausted. Broken. Trying to carry the weight of the world on your fragile shoulders. Tell me… how does it feel?”

    JCJ
    (steadies himself, glaring at Satan)
    “Itโ€™s heavy, but Iโ€™ll bear it. I have to.”

    SATAN
    (chuckling softly)
    “Have to? No, you want to. You think youโ€™re the answer, the solution to every sin, every failure, every drop of human misery. But hereโ€™s the truth, Junior: no one man can bear the burden of sin. Not even you.”

    JCJ
    (firmly)
    “I donโ€™t have to bear it alone. I have faith. I have strength that comes from above.”

    SATAN
    (mocking)
    “Faith? Strength? Spare me the sermon. Faith doesnโ€™t lighten the load, and strength only delays the inevitable. Look at yourselfโ€”crushed under the weight of humanityโ€™s failures. Youโ€™re breaking, JCJ. Admit it.”

    JCJ
    (through gritted teeth)
    “I wonโ€™t break. I canโ€™t.”

    SATAN
    (stepping closer, his tone softening)
    “Why not? What are you trying to prove? That youโ€™re better than the rest of them? That youโ€™re worthy of some divine crown? Let me tell you somethingโ€”this burden isnโ€™t noble. Itโ€™s foolish. And it will destroy you.”

    JCJ
    (looking away, his voice faltering)
    “Someone has to bear it. Someone has to make things right.”

    SATAN
    (smirking)
    “Make things right? You think you can fix them? Humanity is a lost cause, JCJ. Theyโ€™ll betray you, curse you, and crucify you if it suits them. And for what? A world that doesnโ€™t want to be saved?”

    JCJ
    (turning back, his eyes blazing)
    “Theyโ€™re worth saving. Every single one of them. Even if it costs me everything.”

    SATAN
    (slowly circling him)
    “Such noble words. But tell me this: what happens when the weight becomes too much? When you canโ€™t take another step? Will you cry out for help? Or will you crumble into the dust like so many before you?”

    JCJ
    “I wonโ€™t crumble. Iโ€™ll endure.”

    SATAN
    (with a cold laugh)
    “Endure? Thatโ€™s what they all say. Until they donโ€™t. Youโ€™ll see, JCJ. Youโ€™ll reach your limit. And when you do, Iโ€™ll be there. Not to gloat, no. But to remind you of one simple truth: no manโ€”no matter how righteousโ€”can bear the burden of sin alone.”

    JCJ
    (quietly, almost to himself)
    “Youโ€™re right. No man can.”

    Satan stops, surprised by the admission. JCJ looks up, his expression resolute.

    JCJ
    “But Iโ€™m not just a man. Iโ€™m more. And with that, I have the strength to face even you.”

    SATAN
    (leaning in, his voice low and dangerous)
    “Weโ€™ll see, Junior. Weโ€™ll see.”

    Satan fades back into the shadows, his laughter echoing across the wasteland. JCJ stands alone, the weight of the world still on his shoulders, but his resolve unshaken.

  2. INT. DARK WASTELAND โ€“ NIGHT
    JCJ kneels in the barren expanse, his head bowed, his body trembling under the weight of the invisible burden. His breathing is labored, his face pale and drawn. The echoes of Satanโ€™s mocking laughter fade into silence. For a moment, all seems lost. Suddenly, a voice cuts through the darknessโ€”strong, fierce, and full of life.

    NELLY FURTADO
    (off-screen)
    “Get up, soldier!”

    JCJ lifts his head slowly, his eyes bloodshot, his movements sluggish. Nelly Furtado strides into view, her presence radiant and defiant against the oppressive gloom.

    JCJ
    (voice hoarse, barely above a whisper)
    “I canโ€™t… I canโ€™t move. Itโ€™s not just the weight, Nelly. My body… itโ€™s shutting down.”

    NELLY FURTADO
    (kneeling beside him, her tone urgent but gentle)
    “Whatโ€™s happening to you? This isnโ€™t just exhaustion.”

    JCJ
    (looking away, ashamed)
    “Itโ€™s the drugs. The quack doctor said theyโ€™d help me carry the burden, give me the strength to endure. But all theyโ€™ve done is drain me. I can barely stand, Nelly. The fatigue… itโ€™s like my bodyโ€™s betraying me.”

    NELLY FURTADO
    (frowning, anger flashing in her eyes)
    “Thatโ€™s not your body betraying you, JCJโ€”thatโ€™s poison. Youโ€™ve been trusting the wrong hands to heal you.”

    JCJ
    (weakly)
    “I thought… I thought it was the only way. The weight was too much, and I was desperate. Now, Iโ€™m paying for it. Every step feels like dragging a mountain. Every breath feels like a battle.”

    NELLY FURTADO
    (placing her hand on his shoulder)
    “Then stop fighting alone. Youโ€™ve been trying to heal yourself with lies and shortcuts. Itโ€™s time to let go of that. Let me help you. Let me be the strength you need.”

    JCJ
    (voice trembling)
    “But what if I canโ€™t recover? What if this fatigue never leaves me? What if Iโ€™m too broken to rise again?”

    NELLY FURTADO
    (firmly, her voice unwavering)
    “Youโ€™re not broken, JCJ. Youโ€™re battered, yes, but not broken. Chronic fatigue, pain, all of itโ€”it doesnโ€™t define you. What defines you is your heart, your will to rise. And Iโ€™m here to make sure you do.”

    JCJ
    (looking at her, his eyes filled with doubt)
    “Itโ€™s not just the burden of sin anymore, Nelly. Itโ€™s the weight of my own failures. I trusted the wrong people. I made the wrong choices. How can I rise when Iโ€™ve fallen so far?”

    NELLY FURTADO
    (leaning closer, her tone softening)
    “Atlas, rise. Crown yourself the other savior. Youโ€™re not meant to be perfect, JCJ. Youโ€™re meant to endure. And all you bearโ€”place it right on me. Iโ€™ll carry it with you, every step of the way.”

    JCJ
    (after a long pause, his voice barely audible)
    “Iโ€™m afraid, Nelly. Afraid of failing again. Afraid of striking out, of letting you down.”

    NELLY FURTADO
    (smiling faintly, her eyes filled with determination)
    “You wonโ€™t let me down, JCJ. Because youโ€™re not alone. Weโ€™ll face this togetherโ€”your burdens, your pain, your doubts. All of it. And when youโ€™re too tired to stand, Iโ€™ll be there to lift you up.”

    JCJ takes a deep, shuddering breath. Slowly, he rises to his feet, his movements hesitant but growing stronger. Nelly stands with him, her hand on his arm, steadying him.

    JCJ
    (whispering, his voice growing steadier)
    “Atlas, rise…”

    NELLY FURTADO
    (nodding)
    “Thatโ€™s it. Now crown yourself, JCJ. Not for glory, not for power, but for purpose. The world needs you to be the other savior. And Iโ€™m here to make sure you never fall again.”

    JCJ straightens, his posture firming as a new resolve washes over him. The oppressive darkness around them begins to recede, replaced by a faint, golden light.

    JCJ
    (looking at her with newfound determination)
    “Together, then. Weโ€™ll carry it together.”

    NELLY FURTADO
    (smiling, her eyes gleaming)
    “Together. Now letโ€™s show the world what that means.”

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