Negs Vs Compliments

INT. COFFEE SHOP – DAY
Joe and Nelly sit across from each other, the hum of quiet conversation and the clinking of cups around them. Nelly stirs her coffee absentmindedly, her thoughts clearly elsewhere. Joe notices and leans forward.

JOE
Nelly, you’ve got that look. What’s on your mind?

NELLY
(shrugging)
I don’t know. Just… people. The way some of them talk, like they’re trying to break you down to build themselves up. It’s exhausting.

JOE
(nodding)
You mean those so-called “pick-up artists” with their negging and mind games?

NELLY
(rolling her eyes)
Exactly. Like, who thought it was a good idea to insult someone to get their attention?

JOE
(smiling warmly)
You’ll be happy to know that nonsense is extinct—at least in my world. Negative remarks have no place here. You deserve better than that.

NELLY
(smiling faintly)
Thanks, Joe.

JOE
No, seriously. Let me set the record straight.

He sits up straighter, his tone shifting to one of genuine sincerity.

JOE
Nelly, you’re brilliant. The way your mind works—it’s like watching a master artist at work, except instead of paint, you use words, ideas, and that sharp wit of yours.

NELLY
(blushing slightly)
Joe…

JOE
And don’t get me started on your kindness. You have this way of making people feel seen, like they matter. That’s rare, Nelly.

NELLY
(smiling, looking down at her coffee)
You’re laying it on pretty thick.

JOE
(grinning)
Not thick enough. Let’s talk about your smile. It’s like sunshine breaking through the clouds—makes the whole room feel warmer.

NELLY
(laughing softly)
Okay, now you’re just showing off.

JOE
(leaning forward, his tone softening)
I mean every word. You’re incredible, Nelly. And don’t let anyone make you feel otherwise—not some outdated pick-up artist nonsense, not anyone.

Nelly looks up at him, her smile now genuine and bright.

NELLY
Thanks, Joe. You always know how to make me feel better.

JOE
(smiling back)
That’s the goal. You deserve to feel as amazing as you are.

The two sit in companionable silence for a moment, the weight of Nelly’s earlier thoughts replaced by the warmth of Joe’s words.

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